PR3 Feedback - 28/01/2015

As a result I will finish of my planning and research evidence. I will also put more effort to improve the quality of my presentation and work on shotlists and drafting. I will also do more research into my target audience and similar psychological horrors.

PR2 Feedback - 26/11/2014

Resulting Action: To be able to achieve an A in media I will need to move up by two levels, from level 2 to 4. For this I will have to take extra care in the presentation of my planning and research. Ideally, many of the issues will be solved as I progress through the course, when I will then write my storyboard and scripts for example. My planning and research will also be complete by then as questionnaires are time consuming when waiting for sufficient responses. Following results from my research, I will then be able to make appropriate location and actor choices so that my planning will have the best possible level.

Blog Feedback - 14/11/2014

Label my blogs, as I have now done on the top of the screen, and add detail some of my later posts. I I will try to use different formats of presentation, prezi, which I have started to use, and more videos, probably one for my audience analysis when I will video my interviews.

Peer Assessment - 4/11/2014

Resulting Action: I will be more explanatory in future posts and will add detail to my current posts to push my level up from 2/3 to 4/5. 

Mise-en-Scene Analysis of Se7en opening - 24/10/2014

Resulting Action: I will link my points together to explain how a theme is established and will be more explanatory in my paragraphs by explaining my points and linking them to the effect created on the audience.

Representation feedback - 21/10/2014

Resulting Action: I will use different formats to present data and analyse representations and Mis-en-Scene in more detail. I will also add extra detail to my other posts, use more pictures, videos and Prezi.

History of horror feedback - 13/10/2014

Resulting Action: Will add extra description onto my post to explain how it will affect my horror opening. I will also do a post on horror audiences and will do a separate post on a questionnaire so that I can investigate horror audiences myself.

Jenifer's Body - 7/10/2014

Resulting Action: I need to be able to write the effect on the audience more so that I can push up my research to achieve Level 4 research.

Media blog feedback - 5/10/2014

Resulting Action: Crop my pictures as I have now done. I will also embed a youtube video of my preliminary task.

Mis-en-Scene The Shining - 3/10/2014

Resulting Action: I will write my Mis-en-Scene in a more structured method. I will use P.E.E paragraphs more. To do this I will explain the effect on the audience as well as linking mis-en-scene objects to their connotations and effects.